We recently were learning about writing descriptions. We wrote our descriptions about well known fairy tale characters.
We had to include; adjectives, to create strong images
a simile
alliteration
onomatopoeia
use a variety of punctuation
Take a look at some or our wonderful descriptions about the Big Bad Wolf.
Big Bad Wolf
In
a deep, dark, unsafe hole lives the Big Bad Wolf. He’s wicked, rotten and foul.
He
looks hairy, he’s got giant eyes and he has a long twirly tail.
Also
look for a wolf that can talk, lies and murders people and he’s sneaky. Don’t be fooled like a wombat getting tricked.
His
actions are that he slinks a lot and he’s lazy and spies. Don’t sleep too much he could sneak up on you
and poison you.
My
advice for you is to keep doing what you’re doing. DON'T FALL FOR A LIE!
By
Blake.
The Big Naughty
Wolf
In
the deep, dark scary forest lives a big bad wolf.
The
Big Bad Wolf has huge eyes big as dinner plates. The Big Bad Wolf has teeth as sharp as knifes.
The Big Bad Wolf has a hairy body like a
huge bird.
The
nasty naughty wolf always likes to trick people and be sneaky. He always crashes into people to be
mean. (Also he thinks he is good at
tricking people but he is bad.)
The
scary wolf loves running around and tricks people. The big wolf likes spying on people. He likes searching for food.
He’s
really sneaky and naughty. I would not
like to meet him ever.
By
Jazmyne.
The Big Bad
Wolf
In a deep dark forest lived the big bad
wolf. The big bad wolf was cruel, corrupt, and chronic and deplorable!
He looked hairy and mean with eyes as big
as plates. He had teeth as sharp as spikes too. He wearied cloths
and his eyes as shiny as lights.
The big bad wolf was super scary and mean.
He was the sneakiest wolf who ever lived.
He makes sure he eats everyone in sight.
The big bad wolf runs around searching for
people to eat. He loves to trick people too. He’s much disguised like a spy.
He will never give up. And I also think he
will always be bad. And I also think he will always trick people.
By Josh.
THE BIG BAD WOLF
The Big Bad Wolf lives in the deep, dark forest. The
Big Bad Wolf is brown furred, he wears a overalls and has sharp teeth . He fur is spiked like a porcupine.
The Big Bad Wolf is evil, mean. He also lies and is very sneaky.
The Big Bad wolf spy’s on people like looking at a photo
on the wall and he tricks people. He
always is searching for food like a tiger.
The Big Bad wolf should go to school to learn how to
be nice. I think the Big Bad Wolf should go to prison for a life time. The Big Bad Wolf shouldn’t eat people he
should eat human food.
By Charlie
