Descriptive Writing

We recently were learning about writing descriptions.  We wrote our descriptions about well known fairy tale characters.
We had to include; adjectives, to create strong images
                                a simile
                                alliteration
                                onomatopoeia
                                use a variety of punctuation
Take a look at some or our wonderful descriptions about the Big Bad Wolf.

Big Bad Wolf

In a deep, dark, unsafe hole lives the Big Bad Wolf.  He’s wicked, rotten and foul.

He looks hairy, he’s got giant eyes and he has a long twirly tail.

Also look for a wolf that can talk, lies and murders people and he’s sneaky.  Don’t be fooled like a wombat getting tricked.

His actions are that he slinks a lot and he’s lazy and spies.  Don’t sleep too much he could sneak up on you and poison you. 

My advice for you is to keep doing what you’re doing.  DON'T FALL FOR A LIE!

By Blake.

The Big Naughty Wolf

In the deep, dark scary forest lives a big bad wolf.

The Big Bad Wolf has huge eyes big as dinner plates.  The Big Bad Wolf has teeth as sharp as knifes.  The Big Bad Wolf has a hairy body like a huge bird.

The nasty naughty wolf always likes to trick people and be sneaky.  He always crashes into people to be mean.  (Also he thinks he is good at tricking people but he is bad.)

The scary wolf loves running around and tricks people.  The big wolf likes spying on people.  He likes searching for food.

He’s really sneaky and naughty.  I would not like to meet him ever.

By Jazmyne.

The Big Bad Wolf

In a deep dark forest lived the big bad wolf. The big bad wolf was cruel, corrupt, and chronic and deplorable!

He looked hairy and mean with eyes as big as plates. He had teeth as sharp as spikes too. He  wearied   cloths and his eyes as shiny as lights.

The big bad wolf was super scary and mean. He was the sneakiest wolf who ever lived.  He makes sure he eats everyone in sight.

The big bad wolf runs around searching for people to eat. He loves to trick people too. He’s much disguised like a spy.

He will never give up. And I also think he will always be bad. And I also think he will always trick people.

By Josh.

      THE BIG BAD WOLF    

The Big Bad Wolf lives in the deep, dark forest. The Big Bad Wolf is brown furred, he wears a overalls  and has sharp teeth .   He fur is spiked like a porcupine.   

The Big Bad Wolf is evil, mean.  He also lies and is very sneaky.

The Big Bad wolf spy’s on people like looking at a photo on the wall and he tricks people.  He always is searching for food like a tiger.

The Big Bad wolf should go to school to learn how to be nice. I think the Big Bad Wolf should go to prison for a life time.  The Big Bad Wolf shouldn’t eat people he should eat human food.        

By Charlie